Matthew Spira
1 min readNov 4, 2019

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Strong poem with genuine emotion, but one suggestion about presentation to enhance the reading experience: use [shift]-[enter] to remove the spaces between the lines.

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Matthew Spira
Matthew Spira

Written by Matthew Spira

Middle-aged dude. Combat veteran & single father. Eclectic career. Poet.

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