Matthew Spira
May 18, 2024

I'm not sure I can identify the references you clearly have in it, but from an imagery and senses perspective, I was engaged. I could feel it.

P.S. I am a fan of precision, so extra points for verbs such as "wauls."

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Matthew Spira
Matthew Spira

Written by Matthew Spira

Middle-aged dude. Combat veteran & single father. Eclectic career. Poet.

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